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==Shoyru Info Link== | ==Shoyru Info Link== | ||
[http://www.neopets.com/~na_na_987 http://www.neopets.com/~na_na_987] Placing this here, as it doesn't belong on main article.--[[User:Jacob|Jacob]] 13:54, 24 May 2006 (CDT) | [http://www.neopets.com/~na_na_987 http://www.neopets.com/~na_na_987] Placing this here, as it doesn't belong on main article.--[[User:Jacob|Jacob]] 13:54, 24 May 2006 (CDT) | ||
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''Need a quick method to travel to the far and distant lands of [[Neopia]]? Fancy a winter holiday up in [[Snow Valley]] or to visit the home of the faeries in [[Faerieland]]? Shoyrus possess naturally evolved powerful wings, which can fly you there before you can say 'holiday'. Shy by nature, this dragonish Neopet is very versatile and is a ferocious fighter, making this seasoned battler a prime candidate for people who visit the battledome to duke it out in a test of strength, skill, speed, defense and agility.'' | |||
I placed this paragraph here because the first part sounds more like it belongs in a television commercial than an encyclopedia, and the battledome part doesn't have that detached quality that an article should have. --[[User:Dizzy|Dizzy]] 11:04, 16 May 2007 (CDT) | |||
Revision as of 16:04, 16 May 2007
Shoyru Info Link
http://www.neopets.com/~na_na_987 Placing this here, as it doesn't belong on main article.--Jacob 13:54, 24 May 2006 (CDT)
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Need a quick method to travel to the far and distant lands of Neopia? Fancy a winter holiday up in Snow Valley or to visit the home of the faeries in Faerieland? Shoyrus possess naturally evolved powerful wings, which can fly you there before you can say 'holiday'. Shy by nature, this dragonish Neopet is very versatile and is a ferocious fighter, making this seasoned battler a prime candidate for people who visit the battledome to duke it out in a test of strength, skill, speed, defense and agility.
I placed this paragraph here because the first part sounds more like it belongs in a television commercial than an encyclopedia, and the battledome part doesn't have that detached quality that an article should have. --Dizzy 11:04, 16 May 2007 (CDT)