Sun Mar 27, 2005 9:26 am
Sun Mar 27, 2005 11:07 am
Tue Mar 29, 2005 5:27 pm
Igg wrote:He wants to be though, Lillie.
Here'san example of a Dan Brown style piece of writing, about my father and I going shopping.
"...as they walked across Jubilee Bridge. This was the bridge in its second incarnation, after a flood 10 years ago had washed away its predecessor, with had been built to celebrate the Queen's Jubilee. Built from local stone, from a quarry not 20 miles away, it had 7 large pillars, 5 of which descended into the waters of the River Eden. The hand rails were made of iron, that had begun to rust...."
And so on. Until finally you get back to the actual story.
Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:12 pm
Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:31 pm
janobi wrote:Igg wrote:He wants to be though, Lillie.
Here'san example of a Dan Brown style piece of writing, about my father and I going shopping.
"...as they walked across Jubilee Bridge. This was the bridge in its second incarnation, after a flood 10 years ago had washed away its predecessor, with had been built to celebrate the Queen's Jubilee. Built from local stone, from a quarry not 20 miles away, it had 7 large pillars, 5 of which descended into the waters of the River Eden. The hand rails were made of iron, that had begun to rust...."
And so on. Until finally you get back to the actual story.
OMG Dan brown is a girl, and shes on my forum. lol. And you forgot what colour the stones are, and what relevance they have to the bridge. ;0
Sat May 14, 2005 8:13 am
Sat May 14, 2005 9:49 am
Igg wrote:He wants to be though, Lillie.
Here'san example of a Dan Brown style piece of writing, about my father and I going shopping.
"...as they walked across Jubilee Bridge. This was the bridge in its second incarnation, after a flood 10 years ago had washed away its predecessor, with had been built to celebrate the Queen's Jubilee. Built from local stone, from a quarry not 20 miles away, it had 7 large pillars, 5 of which descended into the waters of the River Eden. The hand rails were made of iron, that had begun to rust...."
And so on. Until finally you get back to the actual story.
Sat May 14, 2005 11:13 am
Sat May 14, 2005 2:28 pm
Igg wrote:At least Tolkein shoves some of his excess 'knowledge' in appendices!
Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:55 pm
Thu Jul 21, 2005 11:15 am