Difference between revisions of "The Faeries' Ruin"

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 [[Image:Tfrend.png|center|frame|Thanks to a restored Fyora however, Hanso is free!]]
 ===Epilogue===
-Hanso is talking to a young [[Wocky]] named Timmy about the events that followed Xandra's downfall.
+Hanso told a young [[Wocky]] named Timmy about the events that followed Xandra's downfall.
 The faeries set about restoring their home, hoping one day that their magic would be strong enough to restore Faerieland to the skies. King Jazan returned to Nabile in [[Qasala]], the [[Ogrin Master]] returned to [[Shenkuu]] to teach his students about fighting the Wraiths, and King Altador went on an adventure to retrieve the statue of [[The Darkest Faerie]], which had been in Faerieland since the events of ''[[Neopets: The Darkest Faerie]]'' and lost during the crash.
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 Fyora appointed Brynn captain of her guards, while Hanso was given the title of Master Thief by his former guild. In the end, they were tasked with retrieving harmful faerie artefacts from across Neopia to prevent them from falling into the wrong hands.
-Brynn is worried that Hanso will encourage Timmy to follow in his thieving footsteps.  Hanso responds by reminding her he might not have met up with her otherwise.
+Brynn was worried that Hanso would encourage Timmy to follow in his thieving footsteps, but Hanso reminded her that if he wasn't a thief, they may never have met.
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Revision as of 02:52, 29 January 2011