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I'm going to try that guy! for some strange reason my writing's really good! and humorous, because whenever we do this writing thing, heaps of people laugh at my writing! well for humour that is! so I'm going to try that after my game guide! :)

Hey Pat, where are you and general nonsense going? I guess to the festivities of sophisticos!

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Okay well good luck! :)
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their :roflol:
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY! :roflol: :P
So I guess your going to write a series then?

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Okay well good luck! :)
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their :roflol:
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY! :roflol: :P
So I guess your going to write a series then?


Not exactly, I'm going to submit my game guide for petpet cannonball then after that do a series! :D
And thanks for the luck, it should make my day a good one! :)
Also I'm still thinking what I should do for the series! :roflol:

Hey Pat, where are you and general nonsense going? I guess to the festivities of sophisticos!

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Just been rejected. Says my story got too many gramatical error. :oops: Any suggestions on how I can improve on that?


You could either brush up on your English classes, or get a friend to look over it and proofread for you :)


Umm.... I'm kinda playing Neopets secretly. So, I don't have anyone to check it for me. In addition, I'm under 13 @ Neopets so no friends either. Also, in reality, English is not my main language, so I know no one with good command of English. Wow, I really look pathetic!! :cry: :cry:

Thanks for the advise anyway!

To Backupatrick: Good Luck!

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Why don't you post your article here and let us check it? English is not my main language either but I can probably take out a lot of the errors :)
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Backupatrick wrote:
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Okay well good luck! :)
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their :roflol:
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY! :roflol: :P
So I guess your going to write a series then?


Not exactly, I'm going to submit my game guide for petpet cannonball then after that do a series! :D
And thanks for the luck, it should make my day a good one! :)
Also I'm still thinking what I should do for the series! :roflol:


Oh, and just remember, the serieses are always stories ;)

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English is my first language, and I'm minoring in it in college (actually, minoring in Writing)... if anybody ever wants somebody to proofread their articles/stories, etc, feel free to PM me :) I do that sort of stuff for half of a living right now :)

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Well I might post the article here after I think what I'm going to do, but for now I know it's something to do with a Scorchio and the Scorchio-arasaurus-dactyl which would be quite random! :D

Hey Pat, where are you and general nonsense going? I guess to the festivities of sophisticos!

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Backupatrick wrote:
Well I might post the article here after I think what I'm going to do, but for now I know it's something to do with a Scorchio and the Scorchio-arasaurus-dactyl which would be quite random! :D

huh? Is that the title of the story? o_O

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Well I might post the article here after I think what I'm going to do, but for now I know it's something to do with a Scorchio and the Scorchio-arasaurus-dactyl which would be quite random! :D

huh? Is that the title of the story? o_O


No, the title's going to be much different! Something like the boy who cried, Snazzlefrazzy! or something to do with that! :D

Hey Pat, where are you and general nonsense going? I guess to the festivities of sophisticos!

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Why don't you post your article here and let us check it? English is not my main language either but I can probably take out a lot of the errors :)


I would do that but scared that people will steal it! (not that its that good)
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Well, if it's posted public and someone did try to steal it, I'm sure many PPTers would report the person who stole it and they'd either get frozen and/or the story gets taken out of Neotimes.

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True about the stealing bit, but I'd just rather send my story in and see what happens, and just try and make another one that's almost the same but a bit different! :D

Hey Pat, where are you and general nonsense going? I guess to the festivities of sophisticos!

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Posted my story here :oops: :oops: :

http://www.pinkpt.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=22820
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I'm actually going to write my series first! because petpet cannonball may be a bit hard writin 1.2k of words! :D

Hey Pat, where are you and general nonsense going? I guess to the festivities of sophisticos!

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