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 Post subject: Rainbow { a poem }
PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:34 am 
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Lol I wrote this two years ago... just thought I'd share something XD. It's short, though.

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A luminous bridge, rising into the sky
Full of colour, full of life

Red for love
Orange for energy
Yellow for happiness
Green for peace
Blue for sadness
Indigo for freedom
And Violet for mystery

We all
Need love, possess energy, desire happiness, want peace, experience sadness, demand freedom
And there is always mystery in life.

A colorful banner, full of life,

A human spirit.


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:26 pm 
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Wow. That rmeinds me so much of my style when I first started writing poetry. Brilliant observations, too. I love the way you've taken a simple subject matter and looked at it from such a brilliant and unique angle. You have huge potential, I think. I'f you've written or do write any more I'd love to see them!

I think you chose the feelings corresponding to the colors really well, they fit perfectly. Really brilliant job! ^^

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:31 pm 
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.:Requiem:. wrote:
Wow. That rmeinds me so much of my style when I first started writing poetry. Brilliant observations, too. I love the way you've taken a simple subject matter and looked at it from such a brilliant and unique angle. You have huge potential, I think. I'f you've written or do write any more I'd love to see them!

I think you chose the feelings corresponding to the colors really well, they fit perfectly. Really brilliant job! ^^

<3

EDIT: Fah...quit changing your name, Icey...<.<


Hehe thanks =). I've written some more... maybe I'll post them here sometime...

Sorry for that... Shadow is too depressive for someone like me =).


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 31, 2005 9:34 pm 
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Considering that I like neither rainbows nor free verse... dang, I actually enjoyed it.


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Tharkun wrote:
Considering that I like neither rainbows nor free verse... dang, I actually enjoyed it.


Wow... thanks!

I like both rainbows and free verse XD.


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I don't care for rainbows at all, but like I said you used it as a brilliant extended metaphor. As for free verse, it is the root of all life. >D.


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I really liked how you expressed each and every color of the rainbow. o: I absolutely love free verse. :]


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