{ moved that part down here, since it could have easily been missed (won't make a difference story-wise), and I added something else }
Cilla waved as one by one, several other stars appeared. "There's Saere! And that's Ceolos, the one with nine arms. And that's Void... the black hole..."
"Black hole?" Raymond inquired.
Cilla sighed. "They're what some stars become as they age. They absorb light, but they're technically stars, too." Raymond stared at them with wonder. He'd never known such things existed.
Raymond stood silently as a girl and the star, Saere, moved towards him. He hadn't really socialized with any other people his age before- I mean, who had he to socialize with? Raymond thought back to when he was young, when he had a friend named Cheryl. He remembered now... they used to walk to the dirty stream together and follow it for miles and miles...
What happened to her? a voice inside his head asked. Tears came to his eyes, again, as he answered himself: she died. One day as they were walking along the river. She slipped in, and fell... and her head hit the side of a large rock, and falling unconcious... she drowned. Raymond remembered how he had just stood there, shocked. Stupid, he told himself. You should have saved her. Tears flowed down his face, but he did not wipe them away- he didn't need nor want to.
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{ I don't know if this is considered god-modding, but I am the GC after all, and I just felt like doing extra writing. }
Shadow sat in his gleaming gold throne, clutching the magical Star staff. He enjoyed his position on the throne, before finally standing up, and calling on his advisor, a star named Eldfin.
Eldfin came rushing in. "You called, your majesty?" Shadow was the king now, that the
Shadow nodded. "So, how many stars are there left to transform?"
"There's only about fifteen. Considering that the star staff allows you to make one major wish every day, we should get it done by about two weeks."
Shadow continued nodding. "After we're done, we'll have the most powerful army in the universe. We'll send these, 'Shadow stars', we'll call them." Shadow cackled for a moment, before continuing: "Since I am their masters. Well we'll send them down to the earth, and listen to the people's wishes, but they'll grant exactly the opposite, is that right?" Shadow already knew this information, but hearing it again never hurt.
Eldfin nodded. "Yes, your majesty. You brainwash them when you make the wish."
Shadow laughed evilly. "Bring one of them forward. I shall transform it now."
Eldfin left, and returned with another star, who was pink, with small, red eyes in the centre.
She struggled in Eldfin's grasp, but he did not let go of her. She glared at the brown star with green eyes. "How dare you betray us! Father will not let you get away with it so easily! I am the princess of the Star Kingdom!"
Eldfin laughed. "Igrikra. I didn't not betray you. I serve Shadow, and Shadow only."
Shadow raised the Star Wand, and made a wish... and poof... Igrikra turned into a grey star with white eyes.
"Perfect," Shadow whispered. "With these 'Shadow Stars', the human world will be mine before long."
{ blah, to both parts. Wanted to add more interesting things. }
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