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Ammer
Elegance As Beauty
Wonderful! Very well done! The lily is indeed a majestic flower, and that makes for a good deal of it;s beauty. This really cpatures the mysterious feel of the signature as well as tying in with the text and picture. Well done, excellent job.

Robert2100
A Simple Beauty
Another great one. The lily in the picture is fairly simple but undoubtedly beautiful. This captures that perfectly while remaining short and sweet. Fantastic.

Kitten Medli
Majestic Elegance
Hmm...not great. You really shouldn't have changed this one. It's too busy...too many adjectives. Each of the words on their own is fantastic with the signature, but the two put together put so much description into it that it loses all significance.

Ratings

Ammer-9/10

Robert 2100-9/10

Kitten Medli-6/10

...I don't believe in perfection.

Ammer
It is indeed an elegant and beautiful flower and your subtext fits well with the image and set over all. I'm not convinced that it makes sense though to be honest, something like 'Elegant Beauty' would have made more sense to me, but I think it would still work well in spite of that! 8/10

Robert2100
This feels right, it works well with the sig as it is a simple sig and the lily is beautiful yet simple, not over complicated. Not much more to say its a good subtext! 9/10

Kitten Medli
Your first word 'Majestic' just doesnt feel right for me, the lily is definately elegant but, to me, not really what I would describe as majestic. You could get away with it at a glance but when looking closer at the picture, it doesnt fit as well as the other entries. 7/10

I've been putting this off as i dont want to do it, but i suppose i have to do it sooner or later unfortunately! Anyway, on with the ratings.



Ammer
"Elegance As Beauty"

The word "As" just feels wrong to me, i'm not sure why tho, "elegance" and "beauty" are both brilliant words to describe this sig, but they way you've linked them seems to subtract from their meanings rather than tieing them together and making it more powerful. that being said however, i cant think of a better word to use! 7/10

Robert2100
"A Simple Beauty"

I really like this, as once again, as i've mentioned in previous rounds, it could refer to the image in the sig or the person who posted it, i like that idea. It does well with the lily as they are simple flowers without a lot of fuss. Well done.9/10


Kitten Medli
"Majestic Elegance"

i get where you're coming from, but i'm not totally sure why you've picked "Majestic". However, having looked up the definition of majestic (Having or showing lofty dignity or nobility; stately) i think it does fit. (sorry, i'm a bit confusing!!) 8/10

Ammer This subtext definitely captures the flower well, it is elegant, as well as beautiful. Is there any more to say? However, I don't like who you said "Elegance As Beauty", I just feel it subtracts from the subtext rather than adding, in a not so great way. I think saying something like "Elegant Beauty" is a good enough subtext. 8/10

Robert2100 I really like this one! Great job! The flower is beautiful, yet, you can see in the image, it gives off a "simple feeling", if you know what I mean. I can't say much more, read other's judgings for more advice. Good work, I would say it's one of your bests. 9/10

Kitten Medli I see how you can get the "elegance" part, I'm not sure where "majestic" came from. I could see how you might think to use it, and you can definitely get away with it, but in this image, I just don't feel "majestic" fits in well as apposed to "simple". I think you could have done better. 7/10

AE: the_dog_god wanted to post his comments himself, but I will post his ratings because I'm so nice

Ammer 8 / 10
Robert 9 / 10
Kitten Medli 8 / 10