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Amarise I'm just a misunderstood genius. *fade in* Really. *fade out* (Only the word 'Really' fades!)

Dawn2 Taking Over the World *fade* One 'Mwhahaha' At A Time

DM was on fire! Evil has the name of a lazy animal *fade* Explains why he hasn't taken over Neopia yet..

robert2100 The Original Evil

Ammer There's a war brewing... *fade* What side are you on?

Kitten Medli I pwn you all.

watericesage Evil Genius... *fades* Evil... Chicken???

JellyFish72 I must not eat the Grundos...

Kugetsu A heart of darkness burns within him

Twinkle Pure evil. Get over it.

hellyer Neopian Domination Mastermind

PS, you dont mind me doing this do you autumn_elf?

No, of course not. It just lets me not have to go count all the subtexts entered and see who still needs to enter

Sure, rachel, feel free to use my subtext if you want.

Sorry for taking so long, I'm sure you're all anxious to see what the judges thought of your subtexts. Autumn, I assume Plducala16 is still judging even though he missed the last round, right?


Subtext
I'm just a misunderstood genius. *fade in* Really. *fade out*

If anyone is unclear about what I mean, only the word 'Really' is supposed to fade.

Yes, Plducala16 is still judging. However, if he misses another round, he will be removed from the panel of judges.

[Edit] Almost forgot, judges you have until Saturday to judge the subtexts and again, pick three people to be eliminated.

Just to say that Ive started judging again, but I wont get it up until later tonight, when my kiddies are in bed and I can type for longer than 3 seconds at a time.

Its getting very difficult to judge by the way because you guys are coming out with some really good stuff! next time feel free to make my life a little easier and come out with a heap of rubbish!!

just to say i've also started judging, and am determined to have my judging posted before i go out tonite (i will, i will!)

Edit: WAHOO! first one to post hehe

Amarise
I'm just a misunderstood genius. *fade in* Really. *fade out* (Only the word 'Really' fades!)
really good and really funny

Dawn2
Taking Over the World *fade* One 'Mwhahaha' At A Time
another great one dawn! thats all i can say really

DM was on fire!
Evil has the name of a lazy animal *fade* Explains why he hasn't taken over Neopia yet..
another long one DM.... i like the comedicness of the statement, coz it makes you think, but i dont think it's quite right as sloth looks kinda victorious in the image, not unsuccessful

robert2100
The Original Evil
Simple, true, great

Ammer
There's a war brewing... *fade* What side are you on?
really good ammer,

Kitten Medli
I pwn you all.
not my fave, but still really good. appropriate to the image

watericesage
Evil Genius... *fades* Evil... Chicken???
i'm not really sure where you have got the chicken from... sorry!

JellyFish72
I must not eat the Grundos...
i dont really think this one is quite right... sloth doesnt eat the grundos, he rules over them.

Kugetsu
A heart of darkness burns within him
i like the statement, but i dont think it's completely appropriate for sloth , it seems a bit serious for what i find a very comical character really

Twinkle
Pure evil. Get over it.
great. it matches his expression too

hellyer
Neopian Domination Mastermind
he's not really as he's never succeeded, but i really like the subtext nonetheless


(i really am crap at coming up with constructive comments, coz i cant think of any ways to improve any of them! sorry!)

My 3 choices are:
watericesage
JellyFish72
Kugetsu

I know he doesn't eat the grundos, I just thought it was funny... Just like a ruler eating his minions... I don't know... I just wanted to use it... cuz like if you eat your minions, they wouldn't serve under you...

Sloth reminds me of

Anyways I'll get my judgings up later. Right now I'm working (or at least supposed to be )

Im soooo sorry its taken me so long to do the judging, I meant to do it last night and fell asleep! If the judging seems a little rushed its because Im supposed to be putting my kids new furniture up!!



Amarise Lovely! Just great, I love having the word 'Really' fade in. Your subtext fits in well with the image and the main text, good job!

Dawn2 Just what sloth would say! Again it fits in well with the image and main text, fading really works in this case.

DM was on fire! I get what you are trying to say and I like the link between the character 'sloth' and the creature 'sloth' but I just feel like its too long again. I like the two sections but I just cant see them on a sig, sorry.

robert2100 Short and sweet, I could see this on a sig but again I just feel that its a little bland. When you are in a competition, you really need to stand out against the rest, and I dont feel that this does. there is nothing wrong with it though, its just that it doesnt jump out at me!

Ammer It fits in well with the character of sloth, Im not convinced it ties in with the image you were given though. But, enough people know about sloth for it to work. Im quite undecided on this one.

Kitten Medli Hehe this made me laugh, yes it seems like the kind of thing sloth (and his ego!) would say. He does look like he is laughing at something in the picture so you tied the subtext and image together nicely.

watericesage Nope sorry, the chicken makes no sense to me either. I would have prefferred you to have just used the first section which would have summed up the picture, although it would have been a little boring.

JellyFish72 Again I see where you are coming from and I like the connection between sloth and the grundos, however, I really dont feel that it ties in with this image. It could work on a different image, either one with a grundo in it or one of sloth looking as though deep in thought, but just not this one...sorry.

Kugetsu Yes, it ties in with sloth but again not with this image. It seems to be more of a fun image rather than something deep which I feel you have tried to do with this subtext. I do really like this subtext though and would like to see it on a different image but as it stands, nope sorry....

Twinkle I like it, seems like something TNT would come up with! It matches the image lovely and suits sloth to a tee! Id like to see this one with a fade in the middle though. But as it stands, its good enough!

hellyer *Giggles* Sorry the first time I read this one I pictured sloth playing 'Mastermind' sitting in the chair answering questions on the imprisonment of the grundos! teehee...

*cough* yes a very good subtext, short and to the point. fits in with the character, not entirely convinced about fitting in with the image though, but its not too off.... if you know what I mean!

Im sorry guys, but its getting very very hard to choose who to eliminate...

Eliminate
robert2100
watericesage
JellyFish72

I've extended judging deadline until Sunday.

Bah!

I put chicken because in the editorial a long time ago, a person asked what species Dr. Sloth was, and TNT answered he was some kind of wierd alien chicken. O_o

I figured you were referring to something TNT said about Sloth, although I thought it was something else.


'Neopets® is the greatest Virtual Pet Site on the Internet. With your help, we have built a community of over 70 million virtual pet owners across the world! Neopets has many things to offer including over 160 games, trading, auctions, greetings, messaging, and a green-skinned villain with a head like a chicken. Best of all, it's completely FREE!'

That's what I figured you were alluding to. I thought your sig was kinda funny, btw

Ack, I was going to use something talking about the disappearance of Sloth, but since I haven't been on Neo since... forever, I don't know if he's appeared again and figured that wouldn't work out well. Should have used that one anyway.

Amarise Once again, a lovely subtext. The "I'm just a misunderstood genius" part wouldn't do very well by itself but the "Really" part really pulls it together and sets it off. The fading also adds a nice touch to the subtext.

Dawn2 Another good subtext. It's very funny, but I'm not sure if I like the fade would work well with this subtext, as it really disconnects the two parts of the subtext and I, at least, don't think it's as funny that way. But, it wouldn't really fit onto the subtext without the fade, so I suppose it's necessary.

DM was on fire! I love how you made the connection between Dr. Sloth's name, and the lazy animal, Sloth...also how you used that as to kind of mock why Dr. Sloth hasn't taken over Neopia yet, but, Dr. Sloth doesn't exactly look lazy in the picture, he's not sleeping or anything like that. He has more a look that says "I've taken over Neopia!" rather than "I haven't." so the second part of the subtext wouldn't fit well with this signature.

Robert2100 Another subtext that's simple yet effective. I could definitely see this going on the signature. However, next time, try to put a bit of your personality in your subtext, make it interesting and make it stand out.

Ammer It's a great subtext if there actually was a war going on with Dr. Sloth included But, since there isn't, it may cause confusion and doesn't quite fit. However, many know there was an unfinished Sloth plot, so I'm 50/50 about this subtext.

Kitten Medli Heh, I like it. Yet another short but effective one. It matches Sloth's...dignified manner very well and actually ceases to be something Sloth might actually say. Good job! It's another subtext I could see going onto the signature.

Watericesage I see where your getting at, and I like your idea, but I'm not so sure about the way you said "Evil Genius" and then "Evil Chicken". I think you could have shortened it into "Evil...Chicken?" and still have a nice subtext, maybe even a better one.

JellyFish72 I see where you're getting at, especially with your last post, but I still don't think it fits quite well with the signature. I like how you tied in Sloth with Grundos, but one, I didn't know rulers ate their minions, and two, kind of like with DM's, in the picture Sloth doesn't exactly look "hungry" so the subtext and picture kind of contradict each other.

Kugetsu I see how it ties in with Sloth being evil and all, but I see this picture as having more of a comical, funny sense to it. Your subtext is more serious, at least to me. If the picture of Sloth wasn't this one and a more serious one, I could see your subtext going on the signature, but for this signature, I think you could do better.

Twinkle Wonderful. It sums up Sloth's personality, and his evil laugh face he has on in the picture with 5 little words. I can definitely see this on the signature. I think it'd suite the subtext more if there was a fade between the two...sentences, but it's still good right now. Great job!

Hellyer Immagine Sloth...a mastermind It doesn't exactly fit Sloth, but I like it anyways. It's short but fairly effective. I could see this going on the signature, definitely. Another job well done.

Eliminate: Kugetsu, JellyFish72, DM was on fire!

It was very hard to choose, indeed. I like all your subtexts >_<

Well, since I don't go on Neopets anymore, I don't really know if Sloth is back. But I remember I saw Sloth at the end of the Hannah plot. Oh well, thanks for the review!