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o_0
Unlike the_dog_god I can see the royal kougra as a princess, so I see how it relates.. It's the subtext I'm sure everybody would have chosen if they had been first, so it really isn't that creative. But it really is the eprfect subtext.. so.. good job!

watericesage
For once I disagree with TDG.. I can see a spoiled pet getting this angry over a broken nail.. and it's the valley-girl sort of thing everyone's used to.. I think it's good, even if nobody else does.

JellyFish72
I just feel this grammatically incorrect really.. I dunno why. It's probably because it's so long.. like TDG said, the longer the worse with subtexts.. I think they should be short and sweet so they quickly take a jab at your funny bone. Shorter one next time!

Kugetsu
Borderline really.. It's one that doesn't relate much, but if you saw the sig you might get a chuckle out of.. It is not wonderful by any eans, but it is not horrible either.

Ammer
Wonderful. There isn't much more I can say. Absolutely fabulous.

Robert2100
Heh! This one made me laugh.. I think it was another well done one. Well relates to the the royalty of the sig and the pose of the kougra.

Ziggy
This is too long.. Rewording it makes it much better.

"And this is a good day..."

That right there is splendid, IMO. A+ But there are so many extra words.. and it kinda takes away from the meaning of the text.. so I really can't say much about it.

Dawn2
I can't see it relating much.. The kougra is miffed, but coffee doesn't really help you get unmiffed, so it wouldn't relate to well. On the plus side, however, it's from a 3rd person point of view, and I like those texts the most.

Amethyst
Another one I don't like all too much.. It's more of a commentary, and I think it could be said in better words.. and as TDG says, it relates to the messenger more than anything.

Tonu
I don't like this one much... The kougra doesn't really look anything like it is yawning..more like it is angry.. I just can't see it yawning like that. plus, it related nothing to the sig itself except the open mouth.

hellyer
See above. However, yours had the extra couple of words that made the picture almost ironic.. I want to take points off for copying, though. :/

Amarise
Silly and serious at the same time. When I first read it, I didn't see much in it. But now I can see this subtext working wonderfully. The royal kougra would get angry for having the wrong type of coffee, and it's again the same type of thing we hear in real life, so we can relate. Well done.

Harmony crystals
Like TDG.. I think it doesn't relate at all. The brush comment is pretty much useless, seeing as the picture has nothing to do with the brush.. The question made it tone down the commnt a little.. and the kougra is miffed. We want the subtext to be as fierce as possible. So

DM was on fire!
This is meh. It kind of stretches the topic a little bit, and isn't really what I'm looking for in a subtext.. I can't see much in this quote.

Kitten Medli
I love it. It does sound a little grammatically incorrect, as TDG pointed out, but it is very well fitting. the irony of it really makes it stand out to me.. I would have never though of something as clever as this.

.:Requiem
I really can't comment on this one. Sorry requiem.

Twinkle
Another run-of-the-mill sort of subtext.. Like o_0 and kugetsu, this is borderline. The fact that everyone would choose it means it's a pretty good subtext, but it is not that original. I must say this is the most original of the three, however.

Eliminate: Ziggy, Harmony Crystals, Dawn2

Sorry guys. I had to be honest.
I know nobody asked for it, but I think the standout quotes for this round were Ammer's and Kitten Medli's. That does not mean others did bad, though.

o_0: It IS a good subtext to match the signature, but I think it's just a tad on the plain side. Unique and original are good, after all.

watericesage: I really don't think this subtext matches much with the picture...the royal kougra seems more mad than how a royal kougra might react to a broken nail.

JellyFish72: It is on the long side, but the subtext does a good job of matching with the signature. However, I think you could have gotten the same message out with a shorter subtext.

Kugetsu: I think you could have done better. At a glance, one might not understand what the subtext is trying to say...I, at least, would wonder what's been done to make the queen. But, it's not horrible, and is fairly funny when you read more into it.

Ammer: Brilliant, just brilliant. It captures the beauty of a queen, and yet acknowledges that beauty is not everything in just five words.

Robert2100: Hehe, funny. It also, kind of like Ammer's, shows that royals aren't happy every moment of their lives.

Ziggy: It's funny, but waaay too long. You, like Jellyfish, could have thought of a shorter subtext with the same message.

Dawn2: It's a nice subtext, but the kougra seems extremely angry at something, and I'm not sure if a cup of coffee that morning would have made the kougra not be angry at that moment.

Amethyst: I see what you're getting at, but the anger of the kougra is more the main focus of the signature. Your subtext doesn't relate to the picture very much, thus it might confuse the reader of the subtext.

Tonu: It makes sense, however isn't very funny. At a glance, it might not appeal to the reader of the subtext that it means the kougra is just yawning.

hellyer: This, I like. It gives the message, straight out, that this is what a kougra looks like when they're yawning, and is very funny at the same time.

Amarise: What can I say? I love it. This is just what I would picture a queen like...extremely snotty, easily angered, and wanting everything right down to the smallest detail.

Harmony crystals: I really don't see how this relates much to the signature. I see what you're getting with, but still, kind of unrelated.

DM was on fire!: Like others, I see your points but as the kougra is already lunging at something, you may have wanted to try something along the lines of, "You asked me for a battle, and now I'll tear you to pieces" (Which is long, but I couldn't think of a different way to put it xP)

Kitten Medli: I like your idea, but as the picture doesn't show anybody who might belong to Royal Anger Management, I think you'd have been better off with a subtext like, "Quick, someone call Royal Anger Management!"

.:Requiem:.: I like this one, very simple yet effective. It, like a few others, shows that royalty doesn't give you everything.

Twinkle: Like a few others, it's a very obvious choice to match up with the picture, however a bit more creativity and originality might spice it up a little bit.

It was tough decision but Tonu, Harmony crystals, and Amethyst.

o_0
I liked this one. Its short and to the point and I like the humour. Although its not a princess, I think you can get away with it! Good job!

watericesage
I love this one, although "I broke a talon" would perhaps have been more appropriate! Still one of my personal faves though!

JellyFish72
I like the idea, but I have to say its just too long. I like short and sweet subtexts.

Kugetsu
Im quite divided on this one, I think it would have worked better if there was another pet in the picture or something. However, it makes sense and is funny enough to raise a giggle!

Ammer
Perfect, or should I say purrrfect! It matches the picture and the main text. Great job!:)

Robert2100
I felt this was missing something, I would have preferred it to say "Even royals have their BAD days" Maybe thats just me, but it definately has potential!

Ziggy
Again just too long. The first 10 words are unnecessary, but the ending is enough for me to want to keep you in for another round!

Dawn2
I have to disagree with the other judges on this one, I loved it! Im exactly like that if I dont have my morning caffeine... I thought it fitted in well with the picture and shows that royals are just like the rest of us.

Amethyst
Sorry but this just doesnt do anything for me. I get what you are saying but it just doesnt work for me with this picture.

Tonu
Again sorry but it doesnt appeal to me. The kougra definately looks angry and I think that your subtext would confuse me rather than humour me.

hellyer
Yet again, it just doesnt appeal see reasons above! Although there was a bit more humour and it related slightly better to the sig but I still cant see that the kougra is anything other than angry.

Amarise
Fantastic! I love this one, it fits perfectly with the picture and explains why the queen is so angry. Great job, keep it up!

Harmony crystals
I see what you are trying to do but I feel it could have been done slightly better. The 'Rawr' was unnecessary as the picture shows that for you, and I dont think that an angry royal would so much ask for her brush as demand it.

DM was on fire!
It just too long again. The idea works but it needs to be shortened. I feel that you could do well in this competition though so I would like to keep you for another round. Just try and get your point across in as few words as possible.

Kitten Medli
Im not sure about this one. I like the idea of there being a Royal Anger Management, but Im not convinced it works with this sig. Maybe something like "Royal Anger Management gone wrong" would have fixed that for me. (that was the best I could do!)

.:Requiem
Im sorry I just dont get it.

Twinkle
I like this, its short and to the point. It matches well with the main text and the picture. I cant think of anything that would need changing so... good job!

First off I would like to say that its very difficult to eliminate anyone as I would like to see another example of your subtexts before deciding. But, thats not possible so:

Eliminate
Amethyst
.:Requiem
Tonu
Sorry guys

Sorry for being late with my ratings, twas my birthday yesterday so i wasnt really online. I have to say before rating the subtexts, to whoever made it, it's a gorgeous sig.

o_0 I like this, unlike some of the other judges, i think it goes with the image, theres nothing about the royal pets that say they are queens/kings, they could be princes/princesses. its a nice length, and in my opinion, apt for a sig as it could match the personality of the person.

watericesage I can't pinpoint why, but it just doesnt feel right... it does imply that the kougra in the image is annoyed rather than angry tho, which is very original.

JellyFish72 I like the idea of this one, it just seems a little too long...i think it needs some tweaking, but i like the way its a warning.

Kugetsu it doesnt seem to work in a subtext context. it would make a good caption for a similar image, but it doesnt feel right as a subtext

Ammer i dont really get this one, she doesnt seem beautiful in that pose, and i dont get where the glamour comes in, sorry.

Robert2100 I like this one, but it doesnt seem to feel right as a subtext for some reason, i can't imaging reading it on a set.

Ziggy This ones a bit long... and it seems to be in the wrong person. i like the idea of it being "on a good day" but i think the phrasing needs tweaking.

Dawn2 This one's great, it's original and appropriate, definately one of my faves

Amethyst This ones good, i like it. i cant really think of any other comments about it, except i'd put a comma after the first yeah too, but thats just me and my english is appaling so it's probably not right.

Tonu I know she looks a bit like she's yawning, but it just doesnt feel right...

hellyer This one works better than Tonus (sorry), but for me, it still doesnt feel right for the sig.

Amarise Amarise, this one is great, it just works, and is just the kind of subtext i like

Harmony crystals I like this, its really original. it feels right

DM was on fire! This one seems quite long, but it's in 2 sections so might work once it was on the sig.

Kitten Medli I like this one it's funny

.:Requiem i dont understand this one, sorry, i think it needs rewording or something...

Twinkle This one's great. it works as a subtext.


My choices: Tonu .:Requiem Kugetsu. Sorry!

i'm sorry my ratings arent very good, i dont have much time this evening, i'll do better next time, i promise, as my renal will be handed in by then.

Phew I only just stayed in. Thanks for the feedback guys, it was really interesting to see who my subtext worked for and who it didn't. Sorry to the guys heading out .

Tonu, Harmony crystals, and Amethyst will not be able to participate this round.

Warning goes to .:Requiem:.

Round 2



Entries must be in by Friday, Jan. 14. Judging must be done by Sunday, Jan. 16.

(Set by Rachel...as you may be able to tell )

Pff, I don't like it that much but I'm good good with sets like this Anywhome my subtext is:

A little slice of paradise.

(Subject to change as I'm in a rush. I've also given myself a warning. )

"Two small beauties" (fades) "in one perfect paradise."

I think it may be too long... Not the best I've ever wrote. Gar these are hard!

EDIT: Sorry! I didn't notice Kugetsu's post! I'll change it if I need to but I swear, I didn't copy him! Sorry!

"Tropical Beauty"

I wish I were there...
...and not shoveling this snow.

I'm not good with serious sets.

Gah, I bearly stayed in that round!

Anywho, this one's a thinker, and I came up with:

Nobody understands me and my luvverly quotes.

Fah.

Anyway, once I get overmy little self-ppity deal I'll post a subtext. (Think tomorrow-ish)

This is subject to change btu it's what I have at the moment:

This may sound a bit corny, but:

"Beginning to Bloom"

or

"Flora and Fauna"

Hmm . . . . I think I'll go with the second one.