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 Post subject: some poem/song i wrote
PostPosted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 4:31 am 
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the answer

your parents, your friends
any stranger from the street
while staring at their feet
might give you their advice

the voices in your head
that person in your bed
and the answer was right there
on the newspapers' last page
on the bottom of a drawer
leaking from the shower
raining everywhere

the answer was right there
rolling in the air
the answer was right there...


(any resemblance to "blowin' in the wind" is pure coincidence)


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Wow!

I really love it. It's better than most of the poems I've written. ;)

It has a really great rhythm. Do you only have the words, or have you tried putting it to a tune? It would make an excellent song.


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Lig dom goideail an croi duit...


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 12:08 am 
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Thank youuuuuuu! =)

it's weird, when i write stuff like that i imagine some sort of music, but i never add it


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