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 Post subject: A Daunting Task
PostPosted: Wed May 03, 2006 11:47 pm 
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Hello everyone,

Before I took a break from Neopets (for about six months to a year - I'd still get on every day, just not nearly as much), I wrote a continuing series that I had hoped would get into the Neopian Times. I spent a lot of time revising it and such, but didn't think about it until I recently came back last month.

Well, I started revising it again, and have tried submitting it the past two times. It was rejected for 'poor grammar', but I am typically a literate person and don't know what mistakes I'm making. I've gone over it more times than I can count, and have come to the conclusion that any mistakes in there are ones I don't know I'm making.

So I am asking you, the people of Pink Poogle Toy, to help me edit it. The only problem? It's a ten-part story that's nearly forty-one pages in Word. Even if you can only edit a small part, I'd really appreciate it. I just don't know what I'm doing wrong - I think the plot's okay, and others who have read it have liked it (even people I don't know). I just need to fix this grammar and hopefully I can get it in there!

If you can help, either respond to this thread, private message me here, or neomail me (my screenname is aero_ziggy).

Thank you so much in advance!


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Ziggy, I wouldn't mind helping you! Especially since the weekend is in a couple days. I would definitely have a ton of time to go over it.


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Great! I'll e-mail it to you via e-mail if that's okay. I can't use the PPT e-mail though, 'cause I'll have to send it as an attachment.


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