Thu Nov 24, 2005 4:01 am
I'm going to try that guy! for some strange reason my writing's really good! and humorous, because whenever we do this writing thing, heaps of people laugh at my writing! well for humour that is! so I'm going to try that after my game guide! 
Thu Nov 24, 2005 4:07 am
Okay well good luck!
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY! 
So I guess your going to write a series then?
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY!
So I guess your going to write a series then?
Thu Nov 24, 2005 4:12 am
guy679 wrote:Okay well good luck!
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY!
So I guess your going to write a series then?
Not exactly, I'm going to submit my game guide for petpet cannonball then after that do a series!
And thanks for the luck, it should make my day a good one!
Also I'm still thinking what I should do for the series!
Re: Umm..
Thu Nov 24, 2005 9:47 am
Cerise wrote:ira_7700 wrote:Just been rejected. Says my story got too many gramatical error.Any suggestions on how I can improve on that?
You could either brush up on your English classes, or get a friend to look over it and proofread for you
Umm.... I'm kinda playing Neopets secretly. So, I don't have anyone to check it for me. In addition, I'm under 13 @ Neopets so no friends either. Also, in reality, English is not my main language, so I know no one with good command of English. Wow, I really look pathetic!!
Thanks for the advise anyway!
To Backupatrick: Good Luck!
Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:11 am
Why don't you post your article here and let us check it? English is not my main language either but I can probably take out a lot of the errors
Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:43 am
Backupatrick wrote:guy679 wrote:Okay well good luck!
I hope you make it in!
If you don't then well nothing I can do their
I am totally losing my mind today! LITERALLY!
So I guess your going to write a series then?
Not exactly, I'm going to submit my game guide for petpet cannonball then after that do a series!
And thanks for the luck, it should make my day a good one!
Also I'm still thinking what I should do for the series!
Oh, and just remember, the serieses are always stories
Thu Nov 24, 2005 2:29 pm
English is my first language, and I'm minoring in it in college (actually, minoring in Writing)... if anybody ever wants somebody to proofread their articles/stories, etc, feel free to PM me I do that sort of stuff for half of a living right now
I do that sort of stuff for half of a living right now
Fri Nov 25, 2005 4:09 am
Well I might post the article here after I think what I'm going to do, but for now I know it's something to do with a Scorchio and the Scorchio-arasaurus-dactyl which would be quite random!
Fri Nov 25, 2005 4:17 am
Backupatrick wrote:Well I might post the article here after I think what I'm going to do, but for now I know it's something to do with a Scorchio and the Scorchio-arasaurus-dactyl which would be quite random!
huh? Is that the title of the story?
Fri Nov 25, 2005 8:20 am
guy679 wrote:Backupatrick wrote:Well I might post the article here after I think what I'm going to do, but for now I know it's something to do with a Scorchio and the Scorchio-arasaurus-dactyl which would be quite random!
huh? Is that the title of the story?
No, the title's going to be much different! Something like the boy who cried, Snazzlefrazzy! or something to do with that!
Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:20 am
Zenial wrote:Why don't you post your article here and let us check it? English is not my main language either but I can probably take out a lot of the errors
I would do that but scared that people will steal it! (not that its that good)
Mon Nov 28, 2005 10:53 am
Well, if it's posted public and someone did try to steal it, I'm sure many PPTers would report the person who stole it and they'd either get frozen and/or the story gets taken out of Neotimes.
Tue Nov 29, 2005 3:38 am
True about the stealing bit, but I'd just rather send my story in and see what happens, and just try and make another one that's almost the same but a bit different!
Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:04 pm
I'm actually going to write my series first! because petpet cannonball may be a bit hard writin 1.2k of words!