Tue Sep 07, 2004 2:36 am
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Fri Sep 10, 2004 6:35 pm
Flame wrote:Ryu - First set is too empty. The scratchy sort of look of the tect doesn't go with the rest of the set.
For the second set, I find nothing wrong except for there being no blue background in the av on the left side. It'd be pretty much perfect if you fixed that.
Chii - Subtext is a little small. I love the pink and black tones...Eh. Nothing much really that I can find.
Phantom - The background doesn't match the picture at all. So I'd fix that. Maybe make it a blue that matched the stripes on the girl's shirt.
DM - Er, you sound so sure the set would meet requirements for future rounds of PPTTG. Well, okay. Anyway. Stop colorizing. The faded image of her in the background doesn't look that great. And the font you used it a little too thin. Overall, this set is just too empty.
Sat Sep 11, 2004 12:07 am
Sat Sep 11, 2004 2:11 pm
Sat Sep 11, 2004 9:46 pm
Sat Sep 11, 2004 11:54 pm
Sun Sep 12, 2004 5:56 am
Flame wrote:DM - Er, you sound so sure the set would meet requirements for future rounds of PPTTG. Well, okay. Anyway. Stop colorizing. The faded image of her in the background doesn't look that great. And the font you used it a little too thin. Overall, this set is just too empty.
Sun Sep 12, 2004 6:55 am
Sun Sep 12, 2004 9:36 am
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