Judges Notes: I’m late…you are allowed to hit me. This was a good round, with no subtext that really stood out as being horrible. One thing to remember in later rounds is to elaborate and don’t just say what is on the subtext.
.:Requiem:.Snapshot of Scarlet *fade* Portrait of Power
Fades work well in this signature, and I think the way you used your fade, and the wording of the signature are both amazing. Excellent.
Anubis Fountains of Fire
I like how you incorporated the water and the red hue. It works quite well. Good work.
Blk Mage Frozen in Time
I like how you described how much the waterfall looks like a photo, but I think you need to incorporate more of the picture, like maybe “Falling Fire Frozen In Time”, or something else “…Frozen in Time”.
Dragonfire The fury of nature... *fade* ...The serenity of water
I like this one; you have incorporated the colour, and the waterfall. I also like the fade, but I think the ellipses are unnecessary. Otherwise, nice job.
moogie Falling off the Deep End
I like this. I always think of water when I hear that expression, so I think this fits alright. I have taken points of since you used a common expression though, and didn’t really make it up yourself.
pipsqueeek Boiling Tranquility
I love the word ‘boiling’, I think it fits in well, especially with the colour of the picture. I don’t associate tranquility with a waterfall that large though. I think that waterfall is too large and noisy to be called tranquil. If you had used boiling with another word, it probably would have worked, but tranquility doesn’t fit on this signature.
Pixa Cascading Crimson
Cerulean Falls
I like to double lined subtext, since there is plenty of room for that on this signature. I think the first line is really good, but I don’t really like the ‘Cerulean’ part of the second line. The water may be blue in real life, but in the signature it is crimson, so I think that is out of place.
susannahmio A Mighty Fall
I don’t think you said enough in this subtext. You just kind of stated that there was a waterfall, but nothing else. You need to elaborate more.
Twizzler0171 Take a picture, big or small
And catch in time a waterfall...
I don’t think the poem works well on this signature. It doesn’t have that poetic a feel to it, especially for a rhyming poem like you have. Yours also doesn’t comment on the state of the waterfall, it merely states that there is a waterfall.
WIS Nostalgic Snapshot *fade* Memories of old
I like the subtext, and I think the fade works amazingly with the subtext and the signature. Excellent work.
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Twizzler0171 3.
Pixa